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An erotic piece that I typed up for creative writing class but mostly for my own enjoyment. The characters and settings are totally fabricated, this is totally not based on my life. The piece is up at 26 double-spaced pages, so it is a pretty long read and I thank anybody who takes the time to get through it.

Since this is a bit of space to speak my peace, here it is:
Writing in 3rd person omniscient is my forte, so writing this in first person was a workout for me. I also have never read or written anything erotic before, so this was new territory in that way too. Furthermore, I have never before switched tenses and tones quite like I do in this story. My understanding is that most of the romantic literature out there is written by women, so I hope this piece gives a good view of a man's side of things. This was also an exercise in total self-indulgence since I gave the exact amount of details that I wanted rather than worrying about "how much is too much" and if the reader would get bogged down.

I'm extremely proud of what I have produced and am not looking for suggestions on how to change my style to suit the tastes of others. Although I'm sure there are a handful of spelling and grammatical errors, I don't really care to have those critiqued either. I just want you to tell me if this story made you FEEL something. Were you there? Could you see the pictures I painted with words? Did you enjoy the experience?
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Hell yeah, Micah. Hell yeah.

Sincerely,
2012 Micah