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So cold is my heart
Ice grows from my eyes
Where does the pain start?
Where does it’s core lie?

My soul has been torn
By some unknown force
A gaping hole is born
Icy fingers spring forth

What happened to the heat
That I was accustomed to?
Now sadness would be a treat
Compared to what my heart goes through

From my eyes tears run red
They harden into shards
The color drains from my head
The outside world seems so far

Here I lie in Crimson Castle
None will breach my walls
The thought of love is not a hassle
I seal myself from it all

Hidden in a fort of red ice
My heart is frozen black
Though it’s cold it will suffice
Its chilling protection won’t crack

Red towers spiral to the sky
Growing ever higher
Stretching up every time I cry
Rising frozen spires

Jagged pikes line each wall
My courtyard bares no life
Only echoes answer my call
And there is nothing but pain and strife

I rule over everything that I see
For it is my creation
Cold and bleak as it may be
It is my only salvation

My pain is so much
That my towers gouge the sky
Lashing out in their touch
Warmth and kindness they defy

But all this glory takes its toll
Cracks form in the foundation
The stress of my hatred starts to show
The failure in my creation

My towers fall one-by-one
Shattering down to the earth
And in the middle is the one
Who gave it all its birth

My fortress crumbles around me
I accept my inevitable fate
Crushing slabs of ice fall upon me
I am destroyed by my own hate
©2005-2009 ~firemoth2727
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:iconmotherducky:
Wow you're an awesome writer!I really love it

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:iconfiremoth2727:
Thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it.
:iconspikepuppy:
Wow, you are just incredible. :+fav: this was amazing, you are a really good writer. ^^

-Spike

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:iconmotherducky:
anytime =)

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I'm the new C*A*N*C*E*R never looked b/e/t/t/e/r and you can't stand it
:iconsuzusuzuka:
Holy Hell.
That was Awsome.
:iconchihiro14:
really good..... but I worry about you alot.... :(

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:iconpinkbomb16:
I love the descriptions of some of the stuff in ur poems, its like my imagination runs wild. very good micah.

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:iconfiremoth2727:
Thanks. I was concerned about the first 3 chunks though... for some reason they don't sit right and don't sound like my writing.
:iconpinkbomb16:
yea....but then again its nice to try new stuff, I think its great, kinda makes me a little moody though I don't know why.

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